Rand_Matthew_P2E2,2

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Changed as critiqued previously by http://overcastmind.wordpress.com/ , http://yaidermeister.wordpress.com/ , and http://kamidei.wordpress.com/ . The Final Draft I submitted earlier was a bit too large for people to get the word quickly. They also said that they liked my earlier draft of a swirl with the word so I tried to make a swirl of the whole word. It was difficult to fit.

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One thought on “Rand_Matthew_P2E2,2

  1. ARTD150 says:

    YES! Great changes! In the first design you really focus on the different fonts, but the second design really helps with your word in relationship to the document size- it recognizes the full shape of the document. Perhaps you could of played with rotating the letters a bit to show more bounciness or movement. GREAT!

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